It’s our first tie and a three-way tie at that! So we will be featuring our three winners today at 10am, 2pm, and 6pm. Thank you all for coming out to vote!
A Beautiful Dance
It was a beautiful song,
that unexpectedly came along.
A jagged knife in his heart;
is where the end all starts.
The ache inside lingers still;
death is life’s toughest pill.
He willingly drank the warm nectar;
as demons laughed at the specter.
Seeing her lay so still and ashen white;
no breath and eyes void of sight.
Evil giggles and celebrates;
thinking it’s won this round of fate.
He stares in silent misery,
wondering if he, she is able to see.
The razor fangs of fate sunk deep;
taking what he held but could not keep.
Remains the memories of days;
two tortured souls, one could not stay.
It was a beautiful dance,
that all happened by chance.
Congratulations to this week’s second community favorite, Mark Schutter. You can find the original piece on his blog, here.
Be sure to check in Monday for the newest prompt.
4 thoughts on “A Beautiful Dance”
Thank you! Wow, just wow…
Very well done, Mark. Thank you for submitting!
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Reblogged this on Maleko's Art and commented:
A 3 way tie for the community favorite on The Reverie > I am humbled that my thoughts put into words touches others. Thank you!
hake the hands to congratulate, A great and powerful writing.
Only one could stay, wishing he gave his away. with no memory to keep. That be just me. Though.