You know that saying – less is more? Well, the Alexandrine form is one of those opportunities that really forces you to embrace that concept.
In English, a 12-syllable iambic line adapted from French heroic verse. The last line of each stanza in Thomas Hardy’s “The Convergence of the Twain” and Percy Bysshe Shelley’s “To a Skylark” is an alexandrine.
Basically:
– You get 1 line – 12 syllables. That’s it.
We’re so not worried about the iambic part of it right now. Let’s see what you can do with just twelve syllables!
Let’s have an example:
A wall of white appeared and I was not afraid.
Now that’s a complete lie. I saw the pictures from Buffalo, and if I had been there with that giant wall of snow bearing down on me…I’d have been very, very afraid. Don’t lie. You would’ve, too.
Remember, this isn’t a prompt, but a chance to try something new. You can leave them in the comments below or post them on your blog and link back to us. The point is to have fun!
A hawk flew above me and I was cheered! Thanks for the opportunity!
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We have a hawk in our yard that my children have named Steve. We all find a smile when we see him. You are two syllables short, but this made me smile 😀
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The outside full of purpose, inside darkness.
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I love the thought behind this. I think you’re one syllable off though. I’m only catching 11.
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You’re right! :p Sorry. The outside outside full of purpose, BUT inside darkness.
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PERFECT! Love this thought. I’d love to see you take this idea and spur it forward into a full piece. Just a thought…
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I took a picture only for the exposure.
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Dreams without context are at best simply nightmares.
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My cup is empty the last drop was a killer
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Oooo! I love that!
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I did mine here, with pictures.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/12/i-wish.html
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I tried to sleep but I stayed up late past midnight.
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Story of my life 😀 Well done.
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Hehe! Thanks!
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