So many fantastic poets have sent us their work to feature on the site, and so we decided to do a wordle dedicated to them! These are all words taken from poems featured in our Write for Us series. There is no set amount of words you have to use, but we hope you find them inspiring.
Here are your words:
shiver
jittering
swollen
mask
basement
whiskey
obituary
curtain
consolation
sway
tumbling
restless
expectations
denial
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Good luck and have fun!
Remember, all entries must be linked back to this post with a pingback or by commenting by Friday at midnight EST. Saturday is the vote and Sunday the winner will be featured. The winner is also entered for a place in the spring edition of our magazine.
This one is a collaboration between myself and another member of Team Netherworld, The Real Cie, whom I believe you already met last week. We’re actually continuing on the same theme as inspired her last week’s poem.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/11/quiet-people-have-loudest-minds.html
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Another Cigarette
I sit shivering
In the basement
Hands are jittering
Not ‘cause of bereavement
Face is a swollen mask
But not from cryin’
Half bottle of whiskey
Not empty for lack of tryin’
Hot streaks, cold spells
Should be my obituary
Bet it all for a thrill
Was a sure thing
Broke its leg in the stretch
They called the doctor
Vet made the kill
So that’s how I end up
Sittin’ in my rocker
Staring at butts and ashes
In a chipped coffee cup
So light up another smoke
Crush the pack, its empty
Toss it in the air
Pushing aside
My curtain of denial
I get up to grab
My next twenty
Sticks of joy
Stagger and sway
Along the way
Barely can remember
What was my next play
Left the track behind
On those big screens
From dim lights to bright
As I entered the casino
Slipped by the suckers
Sittin’ at the slots
Plenty of bright colors, sounds
Machines were clanging
While I walked around
Keno numbers blinking
Me, no cash so
I was tapped though
Had a bucket of chips
Needed to start drinkin’
Few wrinkled singles for tips
Was ready to shoot craps
Made my way to the table
Waved at the waitress
Ordered a cocktail
I said anything with ice
Just not rum or gin
Stood there at the rail
Watching the dice
Go a tumblin’
Got my drink with a thanks
My free hand gripped the pair
Rattled, launched
Bounced ‘em off the banks
They came up my way
So of course I
Hadda let it ride
As I made my point
Five times the cubes
Landed just right
Had my stake back plus
Shoulda called it a night
But that bead of sweat
Appeared on my lip
Fever was searing my head
Bones jangled at my hip
“One more time” I said
Eyes turned to slits
As I let ‘em rip
The table was packed
The ivories were whirlin’ ‘round
My forehead I smacked
As they landed with a thud
Suddenly barely a sound
Voices whispered
“Snake eyes”
So I was busted again
No real surprise
Stumbled to my ride
Drove home in a daze
Ended up down here
Ain’t got no regrets
Just need another
Cigarette
Strike a match and puff
So I add to the haze
Cast an eye at the drawer
Thinking about that
Colt 38
No more worries
It’s saying to me
Maybe at a later date
Cuz its time for another
Belt of whiskey
To wash down the smoke
Well howz about a noose
My neck to choke
Nah, no thanks!
I’m not that kinda bloke
My restless eyes
Take a look at my paws
Grit under the nails
All broken and gnawed
Holding a vial of tranq’s
Hell if all else fails
Just take ‘em and nod
Put ‘em down and pick
Up another cancer stick
Hold the glowing tip
Of one to the next
Before grinding the stub
Just about starting
To lose my grip
When on the TV set
The scores come in
Hit my last ticket
Six teamer, really big win
That fifty dollar bet
Brings in a bundle
Also had a parlay
So my score’s doubled
Hey now my hands
Are steady and calm
No more sweat
Wettin’ my palms
Once more made it back
So come tomorrow
I can play again
Time to hit the sack
As soon as I finish
The rest of this pack
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I love the fast paced flow of this and the dialect that came across. Very well done.
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phew!
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Wonderful flow in this. Took me a couple of goes to grasp it but only because it unwinds with brilliant panache and a wry sense of sardonically humourous storytelling that loops wickedly well. Enjoyed it immensely.
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I turned 20 yesterday so this is my response for getting the wrong birthday cake. XD
http://franzical.wordpress.com/2014/11/19/birthday-cake/
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I move a little slow with the times of late, but here’s what I saw at 2am amongst the words a whole week or so late, but thought I’d share just the same, somewhere between remembrance and a future.
Inside laneways, inside those condemned
Narrow fills as gaps, a gaping hole threaded in twisted steel, in cinder blocks surround what shivers beneath a mind,
While winter rain dances to a basement bar, bleeding people and perhaps those sounds to blues, maybe jazz,
As a faux warmth in a brown paper bag, whiskey in a bottle feels good here inside dark uncharted shadows,
Where swollen hands grasp tight to both brown paper bag and a condemned overhang above, trying to keep dry,
Within a cavity’s ruin remains long past its use by date, though still denial renders an unsound reasoning to consider,
Perhaps to call such a place in decay, home; where on these long nights old newspapers mask an eroded concrete floor,
Back inside this manmade cavern, while an obituary pasted to a room’s cracked buckled wall, reminds this last resident,
About days in better times before chaos and death came to town, taking her entire family with a consolation, she survived,
So few expectations populate her mind each night now, but to keep warm and feed a hunger deep within, on scraps of memories,
Here, wait, the rain’s easing; while still strong winds cut sway up the laneway along condemned and surviving built worlds,
Looking up above, her eyes fixate on her little sister’s window, where a last curtain rattles notes on chimed tassels,
Memories flood her soul as slow slips whiskey in a bottle down through this brown paper bag’s bottom, jittering a dance on pavement intune
Before falling over, tumbling out of these uncharted shadows to spill it’s pain dulling contents amongst the lane’s litter,
So, her body tired, she stands up, restless, staring at the bottle before turning to climb a broken drain pipe, reaching for her sister’s window,
To a worn graffiti, poem inscribed window seat, waiting on each morning’s small hours to grow, where time will bath her in fresh sunshine before returning,
Below once again to wander a city’s now many quiet streets, for perhaps just one more lonely hour in remembrance, before departing for another land, a new life.
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I love this. Beautifully written! I hope you get your poem submitted in time for the next prompt!
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Cheers, Laura! Yes, managed to get there before going around in circles mixing weeks up here.
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